I used information from the kiwi kids news website to write my notes and then I used copy.ai paragraph generator ( which was very helpful ) to write the paragraph in red. The paragraph in blue is my writing with no Ai help at all.
Daryl Tan Hong is a speedcuber born in Singapore who has recently added to his list of Guinness world records. This world record is Fastest man to solve a 3x3x3 rubik’s cube under water. He did this feat in 9.29 seconds which is insanely fast and something that is basically a superhuman ability. His ability to remain concentrated while solving the puzzle was amazing. His other records include fastest time solving a 4x4x4 upside down, solving two 3x3x3’s simultaneously while upside down, The fastest time solving a rubik’s cube while juggling, and the fastest time to solve a rubik’s cube on a hoverboard. This Singaporean is becoming a landmark for all cubers wanting records of their own. This outstanding feat was achieved on November 12th 2023.
My paragraph
On November 12th, 2023, Singaporean Daryl Tan Hong accomplished an incredible feat – solving a standard 3x3x3 Rubik’s Cube in just 9.29 seconds while fully submerged underwater. This lightning-fast solve, verified by officials from Guinness World Records, makes Daryl the fastest person ever to solve the classic puzzle underwater.Daryl pulled off this record-setting solve while underwater in Singapore, demonstrating remarkable skill and dexterity in manipulating the cube despite the resistance and distortions caused by the water. His ability to maintain concentration and execute quick turns of the cube was unmatched. With this astounding accomplishment, Tan proved his world-class cubing skills and etched his name in the annals of Rubik’s Cube history. His solve will provide inspiration and a benchmark for other elite cubers pursuing records of their own.
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The next thing for me to do is to use better and more interesting vocabulary.
